STIGMATA


Chapter 02 ~ Locusts
Part 01

ufomanne

As we continue deeper into the world that Ranma now exist in we meet a new character, what will she add to the story? And will she be able to shed light on what happened to Ranma to make him the man he is today?

 

Well, this chapter is shorter than expected. But I realized it's better for me to actually post something in the first place so people don't give up on me entirely. I have endeavoured to make my paragraphs shorter, as well as broken up the earlier chapter in smaller segments as well. Thank you to the kind people who reviewed - especially the constructive criticism I have recieved.

Please continue to send me suggestions as to how to improve my writing, everything from grammar, spelling errors to structure and tone in the story, I am but a fledgling when it comes to writing.

As has been the fact in this story so far, I have had no prereaders and the inevitable mistakes that you find are mine alone. Many thanks to my brother for looking over the script though, domo.